Sunday, February 13, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday--Oops!

It's that time again. Alot of outstanding writers involved this week:

Without an arrow to the heart, she had to understand that a world renowned playboy wanted to bed her and her alone. He had to entangle Cheia so tightly she’d not only forgive him, she’d prove to them both that she could love him for himself, not the persona his parents and the media perceived him to be.


Cu had never felt this way before, and he knew there’d not be another he’d let wrap their hand around two of his fingers like Cheia did now—except—last night as he peeled off his spent condom, the only one he had with him, an infant’s face filled his mind. The intensity of joy that had seized him as he imagined her eyes, her dusty skin color to match her mother’s, he’d gotten so hard he jumped right back on top of Cheia again. He had pulled out in time? Of course he had.

17 comments:

Laurie A. Green said...

Now there's a great snippet for a Valentine's theme! I love Cu's internal struggle, and this--"not the persona his parents and the media perceived him to be."--puts a great modern spin on the old mythology. Great six, Arlene.

Chrystalla said...

Ah, here is love. And kids! lol! :-) Nice snippet, Arlene!

Lex Valentine said...

Men who get excited at the thought of making a child with the woman they love are sooooo hot!

Gem Sivad said...

I liked this a lot. His thoughts drew a picture erotic and tender at the same time.

Nice.

gem

Sandra Sookoo said...

Aww, what a great excerpt!

Jayel Kaye said...

I have a feeling he hopes his little fellows disembarked before the train backed out.

Liz said...

Awww...love the image of him thinking about kids as he peels off the condom

D L Jackson said...

Perfect post for Valentines Day, Arlene.
Such a great story. Thanks for sharing.

Lauri J Owen said...

Great six!

Taryn Kincaid said...

Cu and arrows to the heart and Valentine's Day! Perfect.

Marie Dees said...

Cu is such a romantic...

bet he didn't

Casi said...

No he didn't. They never do.

Awesome six, and very appropriate.

Ella Drake said...

Of course he didn't! There's no such thing. Trouble's coming!

Jessica Subject said...

Uh-oh, sounds like things didn't go as planned. A great six! :)

Eleri Stone said...

Oh, Cu. Sounds like trouble to me too.

Fred said...

Of course he pulled out in time, we men have this down to a science. Of course, I never understood the need for men to be loved for themselves in lieu of ther persona. Who gives a shit, he got laid, didn't he?

Nice tease Arlene.
Take care.
Fred

Kathleen Grieve said...

Wow! I think Cu is in a bit of trouble, emotionally, physically, and maybe a big change in his future coming his way! Way to get all of that packed into your Six!