Saturday, January 29, 2011

Men Behaving Badly. Six + Sentence Sunday

 Joy's Creation
Setting:
Valentine gala. Son of a love goddess, so forced to attend. Private room. Our hero is a liar. He does not have a tattoo. He is dusted to appear like a greek statue and wears only a mask, loincloth, and a custom made condom with a unique pattern, fitted for a god and undectable as such.




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Cheia focused where the pattern began, below the head of his bobbing, grinning, drooling ‘oh so happy to see her’ dick. Touchmetouchmetouchme—pleasepleaseplease— damn woman.
Outlined in black, two dozen red stars glittered down each side. Dainty red hearts at his base formed the arrow tip, pointing at his balls.
Tension jittered through him, making him harder than the Statue of Liberty. Cu fell so deeply into the turquoise eyes peering up at him—he knew he’d never be the same again.

“Didn’t getting a tattoo like that hurt something terrible?” she asked.

“Yes. Hurts just talking about it. Kiss me to make it all better?”
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21 comments:

Barbara Elsborg said...

Very visual scene and funny too! I can just picture Cu and I want one of my own, please!

Taryn Kincaid said...

Funny...and yet...just ever so painful. For him. Great visuals.

Rebecca Royce said...

Kiss me and make it better. Okay! LOL. Great work.

KL/LE said...

Nicely written, thanks for sharing!

Cate Masters said...

The Statue of Liberty's an excellent visual, lol. Very vivid description, great job!

Jessica Subject said...

Very cute! Love this six! :)

Sandra Sookoo said...

LOL very funny! Great job!

Laurie A. Green said...

Wonderful, Arlene. Love the sense of playfulness and the descriptions...awesomeness! The phrasing is visually descriptive and shows his craving.

touchmetouchmetouchme--pleasepleaseplease

Love that.

Lisa Fox said...

Lol! That is a very fun snippet.

Trish said...

LOL, he seems to be over the pain. (snicker

Quite a visual here.

Dee Carney said...

LOL. Cute!

Eleri Stone said...

This is great. Funny and sexy. Sounds like one hell of a party.

The Naughty Reader said...

Loved it! Brought a very naughty smile to my lips.

Marsha A. Moore said...

Sounds like a wild character and an even wilder time with him will follow! Fascinating character!

D. F. Krieger said...

OMG, hot! Love it and his sarcastic hopefulness!

Marie Dees said...

LOL! Oh, I love that!

Arlene said...

Thanks for all the comments. I edited my notes to start. I hadnt made it clear that he's a liar.

heatherthurmeier said...

Interesting snippet. I'm curious to see where this goes!

Jo-Anne Kenrick said...

what a fun snippet, and I just love the premise around this. Interesting stuff!

Kathleen Grieve said...

Great descriptions, here! He's definitely needed a little bit of a release! LOL

Hailey Edwards said...

LOL Very fun snippet.